Tuesday, 27 April 2021

14 of 40

During last week I've done two more tracks.💪


On the 13th track we were up high and some other people hade a drone. I watched them fly it.
On the 14th track it wasn't just me and my mum - my mum's friends also came. There was a spider cave and I saw 3 big spiders. It was fun!😛😝


I have 26 tracks to go! I have to do 3 tracks each month to complete it this year.


Tuesday, 20 April 2021

School Holiday Adventure




 Hi, I have done a long track on the weekend, and my goal is to do 40 tracks this year I have done 13 tracks already. The last track was quiet easy for me but it was hard for my mum.

    I liked about the track is that it had rocks to climb. I didn't like about the track is that it was slippery and I fell 6 times. The best about the track was that it was beautiful. 

    After the track I felt proud and happy! I learnt that you notice more when you walk not when you are ridding a vehicle.

Tuesday, 13 April 2021

The crash! by Platon

Writing Prompt - Crash!

What do you notice? What do you wonder?

 Describe the scene with detail and description.

Three things to think about:

  1. How has the helicopter crashed?

  2. Who might be able to help in this situation?

  3. What might he be afraid of?


Thesaurus

WOW Words:   (you could use these Wow words in your description below)

  • injured

  • viciously 

  • propellers


Fix these sick sentences and add them to your description below.


Booming, the plane crashed!


The meteroid crashed right into the plane and cracked the plane engines of! 


Badly, he was hurt!



WALT: Describe

Start your description here: Quickly the plane flied through the air but then meteoroids crashed from the air. Luckily the plane was really fast but quicker then ever the last meteroid crashed right into the plane and cracked the plane engines of! The man screamed from pain.He hoped somebody from the nearby neighborhood could hear him. Booming, the plane crashed! Injured, the man got from the ground feeling really painful. Slowly, the man walked then tripped. Suddenly, the man saw a helicopter in the air. Loudly the helicopter lowered next to the man. Feeling relieved the man fell to sleep.


Google drawing self portrain of me

digital dig by Platon