Writing Prompt - Crash!
What do you notice? What do you wonder?
Describe the scene with detail and description.
Three things to think about:
How has the helicopter crashed?
Who might be able to help in this situation?
What might he be afraid of?
WOW Words: (you could use these Wow words in your description below)
injured
viciously
propellers
Fix these sick sentences and add them to your description below.
Booming, the plane crashed!
The meteroid crashed right into the plane and cracked the plane engines of!
Badly, he was hurt!
WALT: Describe
Start your description here: Quickly the plane flied through the air but then meteoroids crashed from the air. Luckily the plane was really fast but quicker then ever the last meteroid crashed right into the plane and cracked the plane engines of! The man screamed from pain.He hoped somebody from the nearby neighborhood could hear him. Booming, the plane crashed! Injured, the man got from the ground feeling really painful. Slowly, the man walked then tripped. Suddenly, the man saw a helicopter in the air. Loudly the helicopter lowered next to the man. Feeling relieved the man fell to sleep.
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