Kia ora Platon. Great job creating visual imagery and mood in your sentences and story about a volcano exploding. Try to pay attention to the tense you are using (past or present) and stick with it throughout the story. Awesome picture too! Keep up the great work.
Hi Harry here, I like how your describing what a volcano eruption would be like. I think volcanoes are different in some ways what do you think?.Blog ya later
Kia ora Platon. Great job creating visual imagery and mood in your sentences and story about a volcano exploding. Try to pay attention to the tense you are using (past or present) and stick with it throughout the story. Awesome picture too! Keep up the great work.
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