Kia ora Platon. Thanks for sharing your newspaper report of the fake volcanic eruption. You have included some great important information to detail the who, what, where, when and why. Make sure you reread your writing to see if you need to break up your sentences more. Great work.
Kia ora Platon. Thanks for sharing your newspaper report of the fake volcanic eruption. You have included some great important information to detail the who, what, where, when and why. Make sure you reread your writing to see if you need to break up your sentences more. Great work.
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