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Door story #3

 Creak went the door. Inside was so creepy I almost fell over. It was very strange inside because there were no people but there were holes in the walls and bumps on the floor. 

Bang, the door shut behind me. I realized I was trapped. I fell down on purpose because I was terrified. Then I saw a monster walk through the hallway. It was really buffed, grey and big. I kept silent.

I went through the first door that I saw. When I went in I decided to make a plan to get out. I decided to find a window so I could jump out. I went out of the room and went into another room where I found a window but it was blocked with a plank. I went to find a hammer or attic or something like that so I could get out of here.

I heard a peeping noise. I went to where it came from - it was a radio up in what looked like an attic. I found an attic trap door. I opened it and climbed up. I found a hammer and went back to the room and I used the hammer to pull of the plank and escaped.

The End.

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My door story #2

 Once upon a time, I was flying in space and I noticed a strange door in the middle of the galaxy. I decided to go and check it out but it sucked me in it and next thing I know that I’m in another galaxy. I looked around, I saw: Giant flying donuts, Candy floating everywhere and chocolate that look like giant castle doors. I heard one of the donut’s say: What kind of food do you think is that? I was surprised by what the donut said.It was hard to believe that I’m not dreaming. Hello, can you hear me? My name is Platon. I said. Everything else said: what a strange name for some kind of food. I flew straight to the closest planet. I talked to some things that lived there. Most of them just ignored me but there was one thing that told me everything about where I was which was really helpful.I decided to head to a store because I was starving. When I got there there was clothes everywhere instead of food. Incredible...they are eating clothes in this galaxy! So I walked back to my spaceship to get back to my galaxy and have a normal dinner.

The End.

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Door story #1

Once upon a time, while I was walking in the forest I saw a strange door in the tree and so I decided to go and check it out. The door was heavy and it made a squeaking noise. I couldn’t see anything so I put my head inside. I still couldn’t see anything but I could smell something delicious. I went inside fully this time, but then something opened below me and I fell in it. 

When I woke up I saw that I was in a scary mansion. First of all I  found an axe to protect myself, but then I realized that it was just the room that was old and a nice man lived there. The man invited me to stay for a few nights and told me about the world I got into while he started to make tea and gave me cookies. 

Firstly, I found out that his house is a common house in this world and he is an inventor.
Secondly, he told me that in this world I can travel into any world I want to.
And what is important, there is only one way to get out of this world and get back to the normal world. 

The next day I started to miss my friends and family so I asked to take me back to my world. He took me to the place where I could go back to my world. Me and the man said goodbye and I promised to visit him in the future. I actually started to visit often. Soon we became great friends. 

The End.

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My review on Fall Boys - a video game.

 I am reviewing a video game called Fall Boys. 

The good things about the game are it is free version of Fall Guys, it has amazing skins and you can make friends and you can play it on any device

The things i don't like about Fall Boys are it's a copy of Fall Guys and you can say bad words in it.

I'll rate Fall Boys 4 /5 stars and I recommend playing it.