Creak went the door. Inside was so creepy I almost fell over. It was very strange inside because there were no people but there were holes in the walls and bumps on the floor.
Bang, the door shut behind me. I realized I was trapped. I fell down on purpose because I was terrified. Then I saw a monster walk through the hallway. It was really buffed, grey and big. I kept silent.
I went through the first door that I saw. When I went in I decided to make a plan to get out. I decided to find a window so I could jump out. I went out of the room and went into another room where I found a window but it was blocked with a plank. I went to find a hammer or attic or something like that so I could get out of here.
I heard a peeping noise. I went to where it came from - it was a radio up in what looked like an attic. I found an attic trap door. I opened it and climbed up. I found a hammer and went back to the room and I used the hammer to pull of the plank and escaped.
The End.
Kia ora Platon. Great work with your Doorway 3 writing. I really liked the sentence 'Bang, the door shut behind me. I realized I was trapped'. This gives a great sense of mood and makes me want to find out more as a reader. Starting the story with 'Creek went the door' is a great opening sentence too to hook in your reader. Keep up the great work.
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