Once upon a time, while I was walking in the forest I saw a strange door in the tree and so I decided to go and check it out. The door was heavy and it made a squeaking noise. I couldn’t see anything so I put my head inside. I still couldn’t see anything but I could smell something delicious. I went inside fully this time, but then something opened below me and I fell in it.
When I woke up I saw that I was in a scary mansion. First of all I found an axe to protect myself, but then I realized that it was just the room that was old and a nice man lived there. The man invited me to stay for a few nights and told me about the world I got into while he started to make tea and gave me cookies.
Firstly, I found out that his house is a common house in this world and he is an inventor.
Secondly, he told me that in this world I can travel into any world I want to.
And what is important, there is only one way to get out of this world and get back to the normal world.
The next day I started to miss my friends and family so I asked to take me back to my world. He took me to the place where I could go back to my world. Me and the man said goodbye and I promised to visit him in the future. I actually started to visit often. Soon we became great friends.
The End.
Kia ora Platon. Thanks for sharing your Doorway 1 story. Your story lends itself to lots of different stories where you visit different worlds. Great use of sequence words to help your writing flow.
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