Writing session 4

 

My animation

Nasa coloring

I did a color in

I found it on the summer learning journey blog

It was easy

What do you think?

Voices in the park

Writing session 1

 

Mosaic

 

Writing seasion 2

 

Bird story.

Sumo painting -- Dragon head

 

Hare's my drawing of a dragon head. It was pretty hard to choose the colors and finding them.

Write to describe.

Fact File for NZ Endangered Birds by Platon.

kindness calendar.

Sourcing Information

Label and describe.

Bird of the year.

Is seeing believing?

 

Door story #3

 Creak went the door. Inside was so creepy I almost fell over. It was very strange inside because there were no people but there were holes in the walls and bumps on the floor. 

Bang, the door shut behind me. I realized I was trapped. I fell down on purpose because I was terrified. Then I saw a monster walk through the hallway. It was really buffed, grey and big. I kept silent.

I went through the first door that I saw. When I went in I decided to make a plan to get out. I decided to find a window so I could jump out. I went out of the room and went into another room where I found a window but it was blocked with a plank. I went to find a hammer or attic or something like that so I could get out of here.

I heard a peeping noise. I went to where it came from - it was a radio up in what looked like an attic. I found an attic trap door. I opened it and climbed up. I found a hammer and went back to the room and I used the hammer to pull of the plank and escaped.

The End.

What is Media

replying on comments slide

Quailty blog post by Platon

 

My door story #2

 Once upon a time, I was flying in space and I noticed a strange door in the middle of the galaxy. I decided to go and check it out but it sucked me in it and next thing I know that I’m in another galaxy. I looked around, I saw: Giant flying donuts, Candy floating everywhere and chocolate that look like giant castle doors. I heard one of the donut’s say: What kind of food do you think is that? I was surprised by what the donut said.It was hard to believe that I’m not dreaming. Hello, can you hear me? My name is Platon. I said. Everything else said: what a strange name for some kind of food. I flew straight to the closest planet. I talked to some things that lived there. Most of them just ignored me but there was one thing that told me everything about where I was which was really helpful.I decided to head to a store because I was starving. When I got there there was clothes everywhere instead of food. Incredible...they are eating clothes in this galaxy! So I walked back to my spaceship to get back to my galaxy and have a normal dinner.

The End.

What is a Quality blog comment by Platon

 

Door story #1

Once upon a time, while I was walking in the forest I saw a strange door in the tree and so I decided to go and check it out. The door was heavy and it made a squeaking noise. I couldn’t see anything so I put my head inside. I still couldn’t see anything but I could smell something delicious. I went inside fully this time, but then something opened below me and I fell in it. 

When I woke up I saw that I was in a scary mansion. First of all I  found an axe to protect myself, but then I realized that it was just the room that was old and a nice man lived there. The man invited me to stay for a few nights and told me about the world I got into while he started to make tea and gave me cookies. 

Firstly, I found out that his house is a common house in this world and he is an inventor.
Secondly, he told me that in this world I can travel into any world I want to.
And what is important, there is only one way to get out of this world and get back to the normal world. 

The next day I started to miss my friends and family so I asked to take me back to my world. He took me to the place where I could go back to my world. Me and the man said goodbye and I promised to visit him in the future. I actually started to visit often. Soon we became great friends. 

The End.

My word art about quality blog comments

 

My review on Fall Boys - a video game.

 I am reviewing a video game called Fall Boys. 

The good things about the game are it is free version of Fall Guys, it has amazing skins and you can make friends and you can play it on any device

The things i don't like about Fall Boys are it's a copy of Fall Guys and you can say bad words in it.

I'll rate Fall Boys 4 /5 stars and I recommend playing it.

My Whizzbrain slide

My haiku

Lava goes out the top

Burning fire flies out like canon balls 

Volcano in a bad mood

Volcanoes of Auckland 2

Volcanoes of Auckland 1

 

My dream room

 

MY Friday volcano slide

My Auckland and beyond slide

My Volcano answers

My 3D shapes drawing

 

My dream holiday storyboard

 

I put scenes and characters and my own story.

It was fun looking at all the monsters I could pick and took me a while to choose.

If you use "Storyboardthat" then search up things it will make you find things faster and you don't need to scroll and scroll to find what you need.

I am really enjoying to use "Storyboardthat".

Have you ever used "Storyboardthat"? You really should it's fun.

Platon, CJ and Rajveer STOP post.

 

What are your top tips for bad coments?

If you do this think what will help you first if it happened to you.

The pres

 

Interesting Science in the Van lesson

 

    Hi, at our Science in the Van lesson I learnt three things.
Firstly, I learnt the three states of matter, it's Solid, Liquid and Gas. Secondly, I learnt that Vinegar can create gas by doing an experiment using a balloon. Thirdly, I learnt that if you put sodium polyacrylate in a cup and leave it for a while and then it will turn into a solid.

    The most fun part was when I was demonstrating the three stats of mater. The most interesting thing I learnt is sodium polyacrylate can turn into a solid. Have you ever watch science in the van? You really should. 

Matariki menu

Quality blog posts

Production post

Matariki

The story how wairaka saved the Nga Ti Awa tribe and Mataatua waka

Matariki questions

 

Extraordinary characters

 

Production poster

 

Pick a path about "what do we share"

 

My pixel art

 

High Flyers by Platon

 

My cultural word art

 

Toolkits day

 Today it was tool kit day and first I did coding on minecraft. I finished all coding level's here is one.

The second toolkit was animations using google slide. I did a pretty bad job. Then the next toolkit was Kahoot! First we did a Kahoot and then we started to make Kahoots and here is a link to my Kahoot! BYE!

24 Hour Footprint by Platon

 

 Yay! Today was my birthday party. We had a laser tag round when everyone got here. The teams were 4 reds vs 6 greens and I was on the red team.

I was aiming at Tui, but all of the greens keep hiting me when I get close. The green team won and the top three players were 3# Tui 2# Josh 1# Oliver.I was in 4th place but I got way less then them. After my mum got us some money for game machines were you get tokens and you can get toys and stuff.
After a while we went on some bumper cars.

It was really cool. Then we went on another game of laser tag. This time it was 4 greens vs 6 reds and I was on the green team. We won easily . I came 3rd place this time! Then we played more game machines. I got 220 tokens and I spended them all.

Yay! I'm 10

 25tgh of April it is ANZAC Day in New Zealand 
But for me it is special day too 
And very happy 
Because it is my birthday!

Last Sunday I turned 10.  When I woke up I went to my mum to ask where to find my present and I went to the car. I found it in the back of the car. The present was a... giant hot wheels track with 2 small ones. I was very happy. From 9:00 to 12:00 I was doing what ever I want! Most of the day I was playing on my iPad. Some of my mum's friends came and from them I got three hot wheels cars and  a puzzle book and a board game.

Because on my birthday it is ANZAC day, we didn't celebrate it but we are going to celebrate it tomorrow! My birthday party is going to be a laser tag party!

14 of 40

During last week I've done two more tracks.💪

On the 13th track we were up high and some other people hade a drone. I watched them fly it.
On the 14th track it wasn't just me and my mum - my mum's friends also came. There was a spider cave and I saw 3 big spiders. It was fun!😛😝

I have 26 tracks to go! I have to do 3 tracks each month to complete it this year.

School Holiday Adventure

 Hi, I have done a long track on the weekend, and my goal is to do 40 tracks this year I have done 13 tracks already. The last track was quiet easy for me but it was hard for my mum.

    I liked about the track is that it had rocks to climb. I didn't like about the track is that it was slippery and I fell 6 times. The best about the track was that it was beautiful. 

    After the track I felt proud and happy! I learnt that you notice more when you walk not when you are ridding a vehicle.

The crash! by Platon

Writing Prompt - Crash!

What do you notice? What do you wonder?

 Describe the scene with detail and description.

Three things to think about:

1. How has the helicopter crashed?

2. Who might be able to help in this situation?

3. What might he be afraid of?

Thesaurus

WOW Words:   (you could use these Wow words in your description below)

• injured

• viciously 

• propellers

Fix these sick sentences and add them to your description below.

Booming, the plane crashed!

The meteroid crashed right into the plane and cracked the plane engines of! 

Badly, he was hurt!

WALT: Describe

Start your description here: Quickly the plane flied through the air but then meteoroids crashed from the air. Luckily the plane was really fast but quicker then ever the last meteroid crashed right into the plane and cracked the plane engines of! The man screamed from pain.He hoped somebody from the nearby neighborhood could hear him. Booming, the plane crashed! Injured, the man got from the ground feeling really painful. Slowly, the man walked then tripped. Suddenly, the man saw a helicopter in the air. Loudly the helicopter lowered next to the man. Feeling relieved the man fell to sleep.

Google drawing self portrain of me

digital dig by Platon

Kei te pehea koe? How are you? by Platon

Are you in the right place at the right time by Platon

mathematical me

kawa of care part two

Bigfoot

When i'm... poem

Platon's bookmarks activity

My blog blurb

Greeting e.g Kia ora, Talofa, Hola	Privet (hi)
Introduce self e.g my name is...	My name is Platon
What class and year you are in	I am in room 6 and I am a year 5
A learning goal for you e.g. I want to learn all my basic facts or I want to get better at...	I want to get better at writing
I like to… e.g play soccer and	I like to play soccer and rugby
My favourite… e.g food is pizza or favourite colour is green	My favourite food is chicken stick
An interesting fact about you e.g I have 2 dogs and 3 cats	I know 2 languages and currently learning another
Message for your visitors visiting your blog- e.g come and check out all my awesome learning this year	Come and see my super learning this year
Sign off e.g Hasta la vista, blog ya later	Pocka (bye)

Platon's "screenshots"

"Know your keyboard" slide by Platon

Hi everyone,

Help me know how to do "See all keyboard shortcuts" in shortcuts.

Please comment the right answer below. Thanks!

My Kawa of Care

Rhino beetle and Me

I'm ready for learning!

Gretting

 

Welcome

 Welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.